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Feb 10, 2007, 5:05:23 PM
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:iconfrixin:
I never done this kind of shots before. Well hardly!
However I have to do this kind of photographs for my Art AS coursework.

I want your opinion on this photo. Please help me to improve!
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Underlay! Underlay!
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Mood: Love ~anassalnor Feb 20, 2007   Traditional Artist
i think the light of flash is over ..
by the way its nice
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:iconneghab:
he's absolutely gorgeous :)
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Mood: Love ~Samirs Feb 13, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
It would be grat if u change place and work on colors :) i know it will b Xcellent sis!!
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ini si areeba yang paling cantik di kelas kan ya?
rambutnya keren ya,, aku ngeliat sebagian foto2nya di flickr.. menurut ku, lumayan oke kok untuk mulai fashion photography!!! just don't stop tryin' ya ka!! :w00t:
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~frixin Feb 12, 2007  Student
ya di kelas aku anak yg paling cantik.. tapi kalo utk seluruh kelas 12/13 dia termasuk salah satu yg paling cantik.. :D
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~Delfyn Feb 12, 2007   Photographer
Horizontal lines give indication of action as does the wind tossed hair. The solidity of the handrail seems to be giving her support. Her expression is static as if she is trying to maintain a stability of her own. Love this shot!
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~frixin Feb 12, 2007  Student
Thank you so much!
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!NarcoticsAnonymous Feb 12, 2007  Student Photographer
this is a pretty good shot for something you are inexperienced with. what bothers me is the flash is a bit harsh (i kno it seems subtle, but i see a shadow behind the subject that could do with some filling using reflecting sheets or another flash or something). also there is some reflection off the railing and boots (the boots dont matter too much) which can be helped by softening the effect of the flash (maybe drape something semi-transparent over the flash to make it softer)
HOPE IT HELPS!
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